Re: Bug#466405: Description could be improved

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Author: Justin B Rye
Date:  
To: debian-l10n-english
CC: Simon Huggins, 466405
Subject: Re: Bug#466405: Description could be improved
(Commenting from debian-l10n-english)

Simon Huggins wrote:
> Description: moves programs between X Window System displays


This is a verb phrase; DevRef6.2.2 recommends a (disarticulated)
noun phrase, like so:

Description: tool to move programs between X Window System displays
-- 
JBR    with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
    sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package



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